Sunday 3 July 2016

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  1. Anonymous28 July 2016 at 16:45

    Hi Wiriana,
    I really liked the way you used once upon a time it made it really story like I think you can improve by adding a little more detail to your story to make it exciting. Keep up the good work nice job.

    Lydia

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